The # 1 scariest moment of all time would have to be a scene from jaws where a guy gets drunk and thinks he's going to get laid from a girl but the girl runs out into the ocean an starts swiming and while she's swiming the guy passes out, meanwhile shes swiming far out enjoying herself and suddenly she starts getting pulled an water is splashing an the suspence of whats going on is crazy and she starts screaming for help and calling out to god and its scary beacuse it seems to be a normal day out on the beach an she going for a simple swim an she gets attacked randomly by a shark and its freaky because whats the chances of that acctually happenning to someone and the worse part is that shes calling out for help an the guy is passed out drunk so when she realizes that he's not coming to help her she calls out for god.
This is all one sentence, and has not been proofread. You need to take more care with your work.
ReplyDeleteRevise for higher grade. 7/10